Oh! my daughter, Oh! my son
Don't forget me beneath the sun
He made by me, She made by me
The final destination of the mightiest men, we should think of it during our lives.
Powerful write....when life is given death will waiting at its end...and we are toward that time :) Keep it up
Very nicely written, Mohammed
nice concept - English is a little rough
that's intense....... i like it
nice and emotional heart touching poem.... nice rhyming too
Very alerting message for all is present in your poem.. Good write Affan. Thanks for sharing n reminding us bout the grave..
Nice poem about our deeds in this life embedded in our children. It's our result in this life. Thank you Mr. Mohammed Anas Affan for this poem.
I like the honesty of you sentiments but do not be chained by rhyme and structure because they can impede what you are trying to say.
A very good exrsise to form nice verses.
Nice poem, keep going and thanks for sharing with us.
When I wanted to read one of your poem, I came to your page, and the title of this poem immediately caught my eyes, so here I am.
The poem is really fantastic and it really gives what readers wants to find when then read about death. Well done Mohammad, and thank you so much for sharing the poem with us.
Death is a truth that none of us can ignore or skip.
The call of the grave so perfectly pictured thru your words. Keep the great job going. Very nicely penned.10++++
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