...Voices...Verses...Squeaks... Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

...Voices...Verses...Squeaks...

Rating: 4.4


...jingle...bell....jingle...bell...
...kye...kye...bye...bye...
...repeating and repeating...
...couldn't learn anything...
...these four corners...
...humm..always caging...
...no flight..no jump...
...the same red chilli...
...here she comes...
...big eyed parrot nosed...
...kye...kye...bye..bye...
...imbecile...imbecile...
...new word...imbecile...
...she called me imbecile...
...losing the wings...
...leaving the food...
...exhibiting the screech...
...yelling the only companion...
...jingle...bell..jingle...bell...
...kye...kye...bye...bye...

Wednesday, September 2, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 02 September 2009

very good poem refreshes my saturated mind....

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 September 2009

this reminds me of something.... MERRY CHRISTMAS!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 September 2009

I were thinking- why the bell ‘jingle’! why not ‘tinkle’ or ‘ring’? I got the answer, when read whole…..phonetically jingle is weighty and the environment created by poetess here it’s appropriate…..[though used as- 'The keys were jingling in his pocket' ‘jingle-jangle’] Imbecile-> hummm…..! ! ! ..........pain--->...yelling only companion... [Kye kye]…….> new word…..it’s ok to me. A to z, masterful technique ammmmmmazed me dear Mubeen! 1010101010+

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Surya . 02 September 2009

beautiful and rhyming too. voted10 surya

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Obinna Eruchie 02 September 2009

Wonderful illustration.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 September 2009

repeating repeating...could not learn anything...how well you get into the mind of a caged parrot and call the human attending the parrot with a chilli a parrot nosed..lovely

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Seema Chowdhury 25 September 2009

an intersting poem very different from other poems i've ever read. write more and more. variety is the spice of life. pl see some of my poems too.

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Meggie Gultiano 19 September 2009

a different write but good..I love it

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Anand Madhukar 15 September 2009

A refreshingly different and innovative write.

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Rachel Butler 07 September 2009

...repeating and repeating... ...couldn't learn anything... Rachl Ann Butler

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