Waited... Poem by Hussen habeeb

Waited...

Rating: 5.0


waited a long time
nothings changed till today
people say everything happens for a reason
and its true

waited a long time
to meet you
to tell everything to you
without no fear
while you hear

will my waiting gets a reward
patience normally do get
sometimes rewards are wet
sometimes rewards are hot

now its on the end
last days of my patience
will i get you
will i get you

Only god knows...
so again have to wait and see
how god bring this to an end
but my faith to god says '' YEA I WILL GEt YOU ''

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 August 2009

Not bad at all, only you have to improve on your vocabulary and grammar, otherwise its a good piece.Keep on writing Hussen!

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Hussen Habeeb 01 August 2009

this is my 1st ever poem.. how is it..? ?

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