Waiting - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

A fabulous nature you presented in imagery galore…
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Ms. Nivedita
UK (Report)Reply

flowing down like a pure stream your words are scintilating.......very nice presentation and crafted till end.............. (Report)Reply

like Lilies that float in the hyacinth of sweeten honey; tasteless lips touches the
garrison of wonderful flowers......Lotus comes in my beautiful reality...such
a lovely poem with a heart...Thank you and God bless....a 10 +++ (Report)Reply

nice simile, well embedded into this poem between two visual metaphors, which are used to personify two elements of the nature :
''Sun glowed after its bath
Water too glittered like gold
Waves danced in grace''
wonderful descriptive poem about the nature, lovely to read....10++++++++ (Report)Reply

A nice poem where everyone goes through it at one point of time. (Report)Reply

a beautiful and touching poem.voted10
thanx
surya (Report)Reply

very well done! it keeps you 'waiting' to see the ending. (Report)Reply

Loved you ending lines here.........great piece! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

again a wonderful poem from you. a poem painting a beautiful picture.... (Report)Reply

Paints a lonely picture (Report)Reply

Indeed your trademark..
this kinds of poem
Well done 10s... (Report)Reply

Waiting for the sunset and the morning simultaneously is an interesting phenomenon, Kranthi. (Report)Reply

Waiting for the sunset is well narrated here. (Report)Reply

stunning! ! ! ! ! ! !
beautiful imagry, loved it! ! ! ! ! ! (10 from me :)) (Report)Reply