Waiting Comments

A fabulous nature you presented in imagery galore… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

flowing down like a pure stream your words are scintilating.......very nice presentation and crafted till end..............

like Lilies that float in the hyacinth of sweeten honey; tasteless lips touches the garrison of wonderful flowers......Lotus comes in my beautiful reality...such a lovely poem with a heart...Thank you and God bless....a 10 +++

nice simile, well embedded into this poem between two visual metaphors, which are used to personify two elements of the nature : ''Sun glowed after its bath Water too glittered like gold Waves danced in grace'' wonderful descriptive poem about the nature, lovely to read....10++++++++

A nice poem where everyone goes through it at one point of time.

a beautiful and touching poem.voted10 thanx surya

very well done! it keeps you 'waiting' to see the ending.

Loved you ending lines here.........great piece! ! ! ! ! !

again a wonderful poem from you. a poem painting a beautiful picture....

Paints a lonely picture

Indeed your trademark.. this kinds of poem Well done 10s...

Waiting for the sunset and the morning simultaneously is an interesting phenomenon, Kranthi.

Waiting for the sunset is well narrated here.

stunning! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful imagry, loved it! ! ! ! ! ! (10 from me :))