Kranthi Pothineni


Waiting - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Ocean is still and calm
Breeze is cool and warm
Sun is bathing in charm
........................
........................
read full text »


Comments about Waiting by Kranthi Pothineni

  • (3/3/2010 7:03:00 AM)

    A fabulous nature you presented in imagery galore…
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (11/3/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    flowing down like a pure stream your words are scintilating.......very nice presentation and crafted till end.............. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (11/3/2009 3:36:00 AM)

    like Lilies that float in the hyacinth of sweeten honey; tasteless lips touches the
    garrison of wonderful flowers......Lotus comes in my beautiful reality...such
    a lovely poem with a heart...Thank you and God bless....a 10 +++
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (11/2/2009 4:00:00 PM)

    nice simile, well embedded into this poem between two visual metaphors, which are used to personify two elements of the nature :
    ''Sun glowed after its bath
    Water too glittered like gold
    Waves danced in grace''
    wonderful descriptive poem about the nature, lovely to read....10++++++++
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (11/1/2009 1:25:00 PM)

    A nice poem where everyone goes through it at one point of time. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (10/31/2009 10:24:00 PM)

    a beautiful and touching poem.voted10
    thanx
    surya
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Louis Rams (10/31/2009 9:56:00 PM)

    very well done! it keeps you 'waiting' to see the ending. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (10/31/2009 6:52:00 PM)

    Loved you ending lines here.........great piece! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (10/31/2009 11:52:00 AM)

    again a wonderful poem from you. a poem painting a beautiful picture.... (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (10/31/2009 7:11:00 AM)

    Paints a lonely picture (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (10/31/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    Indeed your trademark..
    this kinds of poem
    Well done 10s...
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (10/31/2009 3:26:00 AM)

    Waiting for the sunset and the morning simultaneously is an interesting phenomenon, Kranthi. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rajaram Ramachandran (10/31/2009 3:05:00 AM)

    Waiting for the sunset is well narrated here. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (10/30/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    stunning! ! ! ! ! ! !
    beautiful imagry, loved it! ! ! ! ! ! (10 from me :))
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.









Famous Poems

  1. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  5. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  6. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  7. Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep
    Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
    Pablo Neruda
  10. Television
    Roald Dahl
[Report Error]