Friday, October 30, 2009

Waiting Comments

Rating: 5.0
Ocean is still and calm
Breeze is cool and warm
Sun is bathing in charm
I sat down gazing it long

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Kranthi Pothineni
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A fabulous nature you presented in imagery galoreā€¦ 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
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rago rago 03 November 2009
flowing down like a pure stream your words are scintilating.......very nice presentation and crafted till end..............
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Antonio Liao 03 November 2009
like Lilies that float in the hyacinth of sweeten honey; tasteless lips touches the garrison of wonderful flowers......Lotus comes in my beautiful reality...such a lovely poem with a heart...Thank you and God bless....a 10 +++
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Marieta Maglas 02 November 2009
nice simile, well embedded into this poem between two visual metaphors, which are used to personify two elements of the nature : ''Sun glowed after its bath Water too glittered like gold Waves danced in grace'' wonderful descriptive poem about the nature, lovely to read....10++++++++
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Anju Addanki 01 November 2009
A nice poem where everyone goes through it at one point of time.
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Surya . 31 October 2009
a beautiful and touching poem.voted10 thanx surya
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Louis Rams 31 October 2009
very well done! it keeps you 'waiting' to see the ending.
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Catrina Heart 31 October 2009
Loved you ending lines here.........great piece! ! ! ! ! !
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 31 October 2009
again a wonderful poem from you. a poem painting a beautiful picture....
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Joseph Poewhit 31 October 2009
Paints a lonely picture
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Eyan Desir 31 October 2009
Indeed your trademark.. this kinds of poem Well done 10s...
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 October 2009
Waiting for the sunset and the morning simultaneously is an interesting phenomenon, Kranthi.
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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 October 2009
Waiting for the sunset is well narrated here.
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Janell Cressman 30 October 2009
stunning! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful imagry, loved it! ! ! ! ! ! (10 from me :))
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