Saturday, December 13, 2008

Wake Up! Comments

Rating: 4.5

Wake up!
From your unyielding prestige
That made you abortive
And you turned into a nefarious sculpt.

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Sameer Ahmed
COMMENTS
Lal Parameswar 15 November 2015

Beautiful work. Wake up all

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Rajaram Ramachandran 09 June 2009

A meaningful wake up call to the sleepng world from the young poet

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Poornima Kanasen 08 June 2009

Dr.Sameer, What more could have been said? Excellent piece, indeed...Very thought provoking lines you have in your poem! Thank you so much for lifting my spirit...I needed that at this moment...Keep up your good work... Lots of best wishes, K.Poornima

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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Wonderful poem. just amazing.thnx for sharing !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

Wonderful with amazing idea. Positive poem with nice message.10+++

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ata khan 20 February 2009

A beautiful poem, it really is hopeful pened beautifuly 10+++

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Pampero Jadan 22 January 2009

Sameer Ahmed a wonderful theme to face the world to achieve ur dreams to end all gloomy thoughts keep on writing fellow Pampero

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Marama Kelly 21 January 2009

You have expressed well the call to wake up, not from sleep but from the mind numbing conformist regime that most mankind seem to be under. This is well worded and has a good flow and rhythmn in it and the imagery and message that comes from your words gives way to a wake up call to end all wake up calls. The opening of the mind and the refreshing of the soul. To not be bound by the mindsets laid but to renew in the wonders are there for all to receive. Thanks for the contact to check out your poems. I enjoyed the read. Many blessings to you

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Vaibhav Pandey 18 January 2009

sameer this is fantastic poem.....you deserve all the praise... 10

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Luis Alvarado 18 January 2009

A long awaited and needed call to all who sleep yet walk this earth. No need to feel self pity and think that you're going to be handed things in this life. WAKE UP and get it for yourself. Hope lies within each individual and we must find it! Very nicely put.

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Vidi Writes 18 January 2009

Let these lines linger in all minds With each clock bit Things around, going beyond control Let this become a Hymn To prompt a recourse.

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Raj Nandy 16 January 2009

Sameer, let this be a wake-up call for all humanity! Against all those divisive forces which divide man from men! Comining from a future Doc. it becomes all the more significant! 10! - Raj Nandy

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Mamta Agarwal 16 January 2009

life is in living each moment to the fullest- getting out of ourselves is all it takes. lovely10 Mamta

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Costa Anakiev 14 January 2009

to tell the true, i don't like this word combination 'wake up' as i have to wake up at 5: 25 on weekdays, but i like your work. if you want to smile read my 'Mammy! Wake up! '. konstantin.

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Raj Arumugam 04 January 2009

a good call to life...

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Ruerd Visser 30 December 2008

May people hear your wake up call! Heavenly greetings from home Boomfriend Ruerd

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Linda Moore 27 December 2008

Your poem is strong not only in the way you have written it but also in the message, we have taken the bitter pill that has caused an unnatural sleep and must awaken and clear the mind of the fog. 10+

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m q 25 December 2008

haha, I woke up. Keep on writing, you are really good at it!

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White Rose 18 December 2008

Very well written. It seems that your right side of the brain, the creative one, is very active. Keep on writing!

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Jen Shearer 15 December 2008

This poem is very well written :) Sometime, when I am down. I will read this poem, to wake up my inner light! Thanks for sharing with us

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