Thursday, July 12, 2012

Walk With Me A While Comments

Rating: 4.6
Walk with me for a while,
Throw your glum, and please, smile-
Our heaven is not very near.....
See there a grove of pine,


Neela Nath Das
Tom Allport 24 May 2017
a lovely poem of togetherness through and thin? ...........well written
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Rebecca Lyle 04 April 2017
very lovely work, thanks ffor sharing it.
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Mountain Man 30 August 2016
An excellent poem there...
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Tapan M. Saren 07 March 2016
Very beautiful poem.. Thanks for sharing... I invite you read my poems.. Thank you
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Rajnish Manga 21 December 2015
Beautiful portrayal of the serene expanse of nature on way to the man's final destination is quite heart touching. Thanks for this amazing poem. I quote a few lines: Let's walk thru the rain-soaked pine and fir.... For us now, divinity is in everything, Celestial abode of love is our final goal!
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 August 2015
So, flash with delight, and take stroll, Celestial abode of love is our final goal! seeking divinity in everything. what a mature thinking. thank you.
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Lyn Paul 18 August 2015
A soothing poem with a beautiful title, thank you
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Kim Barney 18 August 2015
Very nice. Congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day! At first glance I thought the second line said Throw away your gum...
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Ramesh T A 18 August 2015
Divinity in the love of surrounding beauty simply makes one excited in a trance nice!
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Mj Lemon 18 August 2015
Divinity is in each line of this poem. A great work, Neela. Thanks for sharing.
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Chinedu Dike 12 August 2015
Beautiful! Exquisite! Very romantic love poem elegantly penned with conviction. A well encapsulated piece with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Neela.
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Geetha Jayakumar 04 May 2015
Once again a Fantastic poem Neela. I liked the lines.... so flash with delight, and take stroll, Celestial abode of love is our final goal! Loved reading each lines.
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Beautifully written.....For us now, divinity is in everything..... A must read for the lazy people....they ll walk, I am sure.... enjoyed reading this....thank you....
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Valsa George 20 July 2014
A beautiful poem...... through the shady grove of pine, tread hand in hand through the untrodden path to the celestial abode of love! Enjoyed!
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Heather Wilkins 02 June 2013
beautiful thoughtful well written poem.
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Savita Tyagi 24 July 2012
Very well written. Loved reading it. 'Nothing is extremely unfair' such are life's workings. Reminded me of my poem 'A Point'. I invite you to read it.
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Allemagne Roßmann 14 July 2012
Come back smile for the grimmest-jawed boring finding no interest in love man, written well though i have strong objection as regards the phrase - divinity is in everything-summoned love played well with the words
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Kamal N. Baruah 14 July 2012
can't express in words how lovely this is......! !
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Vipins Puthooran 14 July 2012
Celestial abode of love is our final goal! excellent poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Kasia Fedyk 13 July 2012
Nila, just beautiful, it is so subtle and so much truth as we stand together and walk the path on a heavens cloud. Yes, so beautiful Divinity is in everything. Sublime poem Nila, I love it so much! Love, Kasia
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