James Lee Watts

Rookie (23rd July 1990 / Birmingham)

Watching From Afar - Poem by James Lee Watts

What is this statue of beauty stood before my immature eyes?
From which part of Gods kingdom has she fallen?
Does she know I have seen her?
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Comments about Watching From Afar by James Lee Watts

  • (1/21/2006 12:19:00 PM)

    Hi James...I believe you are now becoming a very fine poet. My gosh...this is a wonderful write...you display emotions and wonderment and feelings that are right on the target. I like how you build the entire piece carefully into a crescendoing climax that has a most perfect ending. Perhaps just one correction...on just this one line...

    'How did this silent dove make feel like this? ' You may want to inser the word 'me' between make and feel...other than that...this is very well done...very well done...

    Lare
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  • (1/21/2006 9:43:00 AM)

    Well it takes us like that sometimes! Keep writing. (Report)Reply

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