Have you left your watch
As the night grows late
Where are your thoughts
Are they on your fate
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A beautiful and discerning poem so well expressed. The recurring lines enhanced the beauty of this write. Great thoughts to ponder about. To my favorites.
A very powerful and meaningful write! .. Beautifully done! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
Indeed, who Watches us, when the end falls. and when the watch stops does it matter in the end? Wonderful poem!
FINAL COMMENT: I like all your poems, they seem so 'simple' (forgive me for this use) BUT they are in fact ALL MASTERPIECES. You can guess why I say so
THREE: I'll tell you why, I will cite your line in that quatrain here: Or Him who died For you all alone Great Beauty! TOP Marks!
TWO: Crystal clearly composed and so gorgeously worded, I have enjoyed tremendously your intelligent wordplay. This is a Masterpiece, dear Rob
ONE: Dear Rob, you use the word WATCH in so many ways, great brilliance is here in the sound of your poem
A great meaningful poem with rhymes.Who will watch us or whom do we like to watch when we are reaching the end of our journey.