We Are Complete Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

We Are Complete

Rating: 5.0

Where?
When did you get me fully?

I was just like before
Still, I am the same

In the sacrifice of love, I gave you
Myself, my whole being

But at the end of your thirsty lustful enjoyment
I got my whole being completely
Except one only

I, it's the library, filled to the brim
And you had savored only Kamashastra by yearning!

Sorry!
I could not take possession of you also

You are plentiful also
You are the one who is full of natural beauty

In every part of your sacrifice
was crowded the poetic stanzas
but only one was enough to satisfy my shameless desire

You, the treasure of poetry, the unreachable godlike roots
And I have enjoyed only stanzas of passionate limbs

However, after all these enjoyments
are we not complete?


29.10.2020 Chittagong



কই?
কবে তুমি অধিকার করেছিলে?

আমি তো যেমন ছিলাম
আছি তেমন

উৎসর্গে দিয়েছিলাম তোমায়
আমাকেই, আমার পুরোটাই

তোমার তৃষ্ণার্ত উপভোগের গ্রাস শেষে
আমি আমার পুরোটাই পেয়েছি
শুধু একটা বাদে

আমি, এটা লাইব্রেরি, কানায় কানায় ভরতি
আর তোমার গ্রাসে ছিল শুদু কামশাস্ত্র!

দুঃখিত!
আমিও পারিনি অধিকার করে নিতে তোমায়

তুমি
তুমিই আছো, আপাদমস্তক প্রাকৃতিক ভোগরসে পূর্ণ

তোমার উৎসর্গের প্রতিটি অঙ্গে
ঠাসা ছিল কাব্যিক স্তবক
আমার ভোগ পূরণে একটিই যথেষ্ঠ ছিল

তুমি, কবিতার আকর, দুর্গম ইন্দ্রপুরী শিকড়
আর আমি ভোগ করেছি শুধু কামতনুর স্তবক

তবে, এসবের পর
আমরা কি নই সম্পূর্ণ?


২৯.১০.২০২০ চট্টগ্রাম

Thursday, October 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,lust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 29 October 2020

Good poetry full of meaning and essence. Well woven words. Admirations.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 October 2020

But at the end of your thirsty lustful enjoyment (I got my whole being completely) you dear poet mb have clearly expressed the whole purpose of life earthly well done you have won

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Akhtar Jawad 29 October 2020

Love is like the virtual blue sky and earth is its. Whatever in between is between the two poles, love and. A thoughtful poem by Mehtab Bengali, a great poet who when thinks many others also start thinking.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2020

A well crafted poem. Truly splendid and marvelous...5 stars*****

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Anjandev Roy 30 October 2020

This is simply excellent write throughout......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

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Sultan Deen 28 February 2021

Beautiful loving poem where man and woman both are supportive and supplementary each for others

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Moore Noore 24 February 2021

wow it's a poem on the human body theory; some words are metaphysical; greatly inscribed; thanks for sharing such a thoughtful poem

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Mac Che 25 January 2021

fantastically crafted the poetic words where love and beloved are one without any exhausting!

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Varsha M 29 December 2020

This is really a lovely expression. So well woven around the natural beauty and the desire.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 December 2020

A poem of great depth. Very perceptive and powerful lines on the effects of love on two persons in love. Beautifully written with deep emotions.Top Marks! !

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