Monday, April 4, 2016

We Are Surprised Comments

Rating: 4.5
Now, we take the moon
into the middle of our brains
so we look like roadside stray cats


Ada Limón
Susan Williams 08 June 2016
Stunningly poetically beautiful examination of our mistreated world. This poem is executed perfectly. Most definitely a 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++.
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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 June 2016
It's hard to believe we didn't know that before; it's hard to believe we were so hollowed out, so drained, only so we could shine a little harder when the light finally came. Nice poem with deep thoughts.
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Jasbir Chatterjee 08 June 2016
Indeed, best way to live is to find the strength from within. Congrats on being poet of the day!
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We're not so much homeless as we are home free, penny-poor, but plenty lucky for love and leaves that keep breaking the fall. Here it is: the new way of living with the world inside of us so we cannot lose it, and we cannot be lost. You and me, are us and them, and it and sky. Your words and the poetic sense is classy...loved the poem.10 for it. Thanks for sharing it. Subhas
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Khaled Ehtesham 08 June 2016
you sense about life and surrounding are awesome.............
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Edward Kofi Louis 08 June 2016
We were so hollowed out! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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