Thursday, March 3, 2005

What Can Make You Happy? Comments

Rating: 1.3

Are you happy right now or sad?
Are you bitter about your present condition?
You wonder what is wrong with your life
You wonder why others are happy


Dave De Haas 09 September 2005

As usual Poemtry hound is dead wrong! ! ! ! ! ! you'r poemma questions that people all over this world are asking others and themselves. It's shows that you can ask yourself these questions and have the courage to ask them to others. Yes your questions do move people. It moved me and others i sent it to. You must be a caring and genlte person to ask such questions. Further more this is your own style of poetry. if some people don't like it then don't read it again.

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Poetry Hound 03 March 2005

What would make me happy would be to see some decent poetry. Do you think your questions move people to think deeply? Dream on. If you maybe answered your own questions, there would be a human aspect to what you write and maybe people would relate and that would make them think more deeply. If nothing else, it would be more interesting than simply asking these questions, Mr. Julius 'are you a bad poet' Babarinsa.

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