What I Wish Could Be Poem by Zarabeth Pawlowski

What I Wish Could Be

Rating: 4.1


When I look into your eyes
I see the world I wish to view
Not only with me
But with you in it too.

Sometimes I wish
We were ment to be
It's up to you
So please come save me.

I wish you were here,
Sitting by my side
I don't think that will happen
But the feelings i have for you will never subside.

You are my superman
On this dark and cloudy day
You gave my world some color
Thank you is all i can say.

Thank you for all you've done
You have come and shown me the way
For we are what we are,
Still the same person at the end of the day.

We are two different people
But two parts of a whole
We complete each other
Two bodys sharing one soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Wilkinson 17 March 2009

Excellent i particularly like the verse We are two different people But two parts of a whole We complete each other Two bodys sharing one soul Spellings again but this is still worth 10

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Stary Night 01 June 2008

i absolutely LOVE it. this is GREAT. This one is my favorite. keep it up.

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