Tuesday, July 28, 2009

What Men Don'T See Comments

Rating: 4.8
The neat white fluffy clouds
Are scattered in the face of the growing sun's
Dazzling light.


Kobik William
Niken Kusuma Wardani 04 August 2010
Congratulation, u see what men can't see... did u stay overnight at nature to create this understanding? good job, keep it on. tks for sharing
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Iron Panda 23™ 17 July 2010
this i really like! ! ^-^
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Les Derbyshire 12 July 2010
I like that! Thanks for sharing it with us. Nice observation and well worked into verse.
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Claude H Oliver Ii 04 January 2010
Our preoccupation with ourselves and our creations blinds us to the beauty which unfolds daily. Good write.
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Merna Ibrahim 25 December 2009
Nice poem indeed! I like the remarkable title too. Thanks for your invitation! Merna
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Tricia Dildine 25 December 2009
wow i love it it's very heart touching and mindblowing
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Rinki Nandy 24 December 2009
you are one of the truest lovers of nature
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Barbara Jean 24 December 2009
I like the imagery the poem provides. Its very powerful,10+++++
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 September 2009
The narrator of this poem has striking images of the universe unlike 'What Men Don; t See'. A 10
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Michael Moorcroft 17 August 2009
Hi Kobik, Love the vivid imagery in this poem its really powerful.10+++
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Deborah Cromer 04 August 2009
Climbs to his favorite fence. This is my favorite part. It is true. Animals are odd by nature. I believe he would have a special spot on the fence. I believe it. DC
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Delaney Rose 01 August 2009
For me this poem shows great examples of the many things men are blind too.
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Allemagne Roßmann 01 August 2009
A very good concept well penned..voted 10..thanks....Ray
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Chitra - 29 July 2009
masterfully penned, with a novel theme
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Obinna Eruchie 29 July 2009
An admiring piece penned well.
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wonderful poem, excellent write..i enjoyed and loved it..
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 July 2009
Wow you could join the band wagon of an elite group of poet Kobik.Well, with this kind of writes, I must say that you 're a class above the rest.
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Bob Blackwell 28 July 2009
Kobik, this is poetry and very beautiful too. You have a sensitivity far beyond your years, your writing is mature, your choice of words are simply great. You are a poet I could live with happily. Bob Blackwell 10+++
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Bele Lele 28 July 2009
this one gets 9/10 from me
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Surya . 28 July 2009
wonderful imagination.nice composition.last para is excellent 'But man possessed of the visual curse Of the delusury glamour of the world Fails to notice What even the recuperating owls see. ' voted 10 surya
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