Where Abides Love`s Sweet Domain Poem by Valerie Dohren

Where Abides Love`s Sweet Domain

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Where abides love`s sweet domain
In the realms of deep unrest
Does it tarry in your heart
Will it wax at my behest

Does it hide between each word
There betwixt each breath you take
Shall I find it in your hand
Or in every tear you make

Will I see it in your face
Set within your smile so bright
Do I seek it high above
`Midst the stars that shine at night

And shall I find it in the air
Floating `cross the azure skies
Upon the wings of ashen doves
Or within your limpid eyes

Do I hear it softly sigh
Through your melancholy days
Let me feel it there within
See it in your wistful gaze

Is it found in silent places
In the shadows, black as coal,
Ling`ring in the darkness `biding -
Love, sweet nectar for my soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 19 July 2012

Does it hide between each word....., I`m sure it does, a very heartfelt wonderful poem Val,

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Kasia Fedyk 21 July 2012

Valerie, you know you have such subtle and profound way to touch a soul, the fullness of your expressions is desirable and filled with passion, your notes set deep and vision mystical. So very beautiful!

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Danny Draper 27 July 2012

Fine sentiments and ponderings, different for each, I guess would be the answer.

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Paula Dagnel 24 July 2012

Beautiful and very moving write! So many beautiful words, and the phrasing was really lovely. This has an old world kind of feel to it; as though it had been written a century ago. Just beautiful!

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Valsa George 23 July 2012

Where shall I find love.....Upon the wings of ashen doves/ Or within your limpid eyes? ? .....beautiful write!

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Sandra Martyres 23 July 2012

Another beautiful write

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Joseph Anderson 22 July 2012

How do I love thee, let me count the ways-as good or better then that famous poem.So smooth and flowing.-another classic

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