Whisky Mind Poem by Jason R Tschetter

Whisky Mind

Rating: 5.0


<Trickling down my throat with some sweat ease
this smooth taste of the flesh takes hold
as it glides down I can feel the warmth in my stomach
its amazing at how the body quivers at the thought

So sick of this incredible taste
cant take this any more
eyes blur and stomach reels at the thought
Its amazing that I actually went out and for this I bought

I need to hold this
I need to destroy this
its going away from me
its going to take a hold of me

Now its almost their I feel the heat
as the state of mind drifts into the past and future
I think of the amazing feeling that I get
I think of the state of mind i'm in and play this to the end of time
Every time I get a chance its the way I feel
This liquid love is for me and its real!

I need to hold this
I need to destroy this
its going away from me
its going to take a hold of me

It'll never destroy yesterday
and I cant take this anymore
my mind is finally gone
and I still cant seem to feel yesterday pass
but one more may take this away
like a sweet smelling dream it leaves me now I'm happy at last
With one more drink I shall drowned the past! >

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 31 October 2011

It's a very good poem, @nd i like it very much, beautiful poetic depiction

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Vipins Puthooran 31 October 2011

It's a very good poem, @nd i like it very much, beautiful poetic depiction

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