Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 100,923 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Whoever You Are - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

I could never live a life,
Devoted to your expectations.
Or have my self worth,
Crush by your disapproval.

I could,
However...
Continue to be who I am.
And I will.

Knowing whoever you are,
Depends on from who's mind...
You are defined as you spend time,
In the making of false impressions.

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  • Ace Of Black HeartsAce Of Black Hearts (10/6/2011 11:14:00 PM)

    An impression will never satisfy.
    When it made full of lies.
    He's a cop.
    He's a spy.
    Oh he works for the other side.
    But of what cause he just never give ups.
    That reaching beyond reaching he's preaching and seeking a acknowledgement of a factitious existence.
    Remember that man he created his story straight from his head.
    With a few words he has spun such an elaborate web.
    How do you dissolve it in the search of the truth.
    It becomes a whose who I would conclude.

    Great Poem, Your Fan John..
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 7, 2011


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