Why? Poem by Jhonny Thermidor

Why?

Rating: 4.5


Why does my life have to be corrupted?
I'm enduring harshly my pain inside,
I'm so desperate in this striking nature,
Still I am a student and feel so lonlely,
Didn't I suppose to own a bright future!

Why does the world have to be evolved?
Progress has great influences in our lives,
It's modifying our lives on a daily basis,
And enhanced our lives' requirement,
Though, it could be as awful as ever wished!

Why is she in this situation for love?
She's deserving a part of the globe,
She has something to accomplish,
She's worthy a safe place to subsist,
Because she has a priceless destiny!

Why should death be a part of life?
Is this part of what is reseved for us?
It is so unpredictable and callous,
What is it really going to look like,
To live in an opposed, foreign world?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jolenish Fiber 09 March 2008

i think you could go further with this poem. it's good, but it needs more sauce. keep going, i felt like your mind was reeling, so let it go more!

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Evaughn Gray 22 December 2007

there are so many questions in this world that sadly i have no answer to..if i did though i would gladly give them to you, i have these same unanswered questons..great poem...~hazel

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