Tuesday, April 1, 2008

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My heart knew no boundaries until i met him,
The sadness of my eyes only grew darker,
The free spirited girl that was once wild and free,
Is now trapped behind walls of anger and hatred,
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Commendable work, Nakia...Much potential within you.Be watchful of spelling & spacing(conjoined wordage) .You appear to have a natural flair for impact verbage & command...Utelize your creative side to employ more imagery/pictorial depiction...AND KEEP THAT PEN PUMPING! ~Fj R~ ..2008..

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Nakia Crespin

Nakia Crespin

Denver, Colorado
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