We welcome you on this Forum, Sahira Sargam. This poem presents a powerful emotional portrayal of a mother. It shows the regrets of her daughter on having shorn the mother off her youthful days, fancies and dreams. In my opinion, it would be interesting and worthwhile to see the world through the eyes of a mother after she attained her motherhood. Really a thought provoking poetic expression. Thanks & Best Wishes.
A great start with love. Thanks