Sunday, September 27, 2009

Wife's Prayer Answered Comments

Rating: 4.9
I have fallen, I am bleeding
Hold me like you always do
Wipe my tears, make me laugh
Tell me “how much I mean to you”


Aparna Sinha
Chinedu Dike 26 October 2014
A lovely poem, well articulated and penned with insight. I like the conviction of the poet on the issue, as wives have to endure a dwindle in bliss as a result of sport loving husbands mood swings during important sporting tournaments. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem. MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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Indira Renganathan 04 February 2010
Whom to blame...the husband or the cricket....a common family issue well penned
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Pradyumna Jyotir 02 February 2010
Every wife has to contend with the TV and the newspapers. they are every wife's rival....the underlying frustration very well penned.
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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 October 2009
fine diction! the way you penned it is nice! wide observation! 10+
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Surya . 05 October 2009
the burden of the song is that you got your husband alone with.unfortunately cricket is a victim.nice thoughts. in india unlike ausses, west indies and nz etc despite dhoni cricket is still played a game of chance. voted10 surya
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 30 September 2009
a very practical poem...not only cricket though it gets the man glued...some the woman is also glued....well written friend
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Ratnaprabha Raykar 30 September 2009
why dont you join ur hubby in enjoying the game, he would love you more for it. anyways avery nice write. would you care to read my poems
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Chang Yi Huang 28 September 2009
First of all, I guess the wife in ur poem is a Tvaholic, who maintains her merriage by watching tv with her husband...and yet, she's also longing for the passionate love she's ever experienced, she treasured the time she spent with her love.she desperately wants to enrich her merriage, not only the soap opears, but also another things they will share together! ! anyway this's really a good poem
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Sandra Martyres 27 September 2009
Great write Aparna....yes match mania can be quite a pain for many an attention deprived wife.......
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 September 2009
Sit with me under the stars Sing me the song of love Let nothing come between us You and me and God above.............any good wife would want it to come t rue i her life. it is good feeling and must materialise thorught out the life....very good poem to be enjoyed at.....10 read mine anywhere....butterflies around....come hoem..home bound
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Indira Babbellapati 27 September 2009
dedicated to all those who get glued to the tv while a match is on the tube...?
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