Inner Whispers

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! Will You...Hmn...Will You? - Poem by Inner Whispers

If I am there beside you, will you hold my hand,
kiss it with tender grace and with eyes that comprehend?
Will you touch my hair that fall on my cheeks
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Comments about ! Will You...Hmn...Will You? by Inner Whispers

  • Gerard Heijink (8/13/2009 4:39:00 PM)

    Oo Honey ko, Pakakasalan kita, ... Kailan tayo magpapakasal? (Report)Reply

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  • Ted M (8/13/2009 5:49:00 AM)

    Vow! the romance and the passion highlighted so nicely in the lovely choice of words. You make things sound so beautiful, whatever it is you want to say.
    Nice, creative and effective.....10+++
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  • ~*Nezra*~ Farrell (8/12/2009 8:40:00 PM)

    I really like the first line :)
    It reminds me and my baby!
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  • Graham Russell (8/12/2009 7:43:00 PM)

    such tenderness..
    such passion
    it makes me weep
    for loves caressing hand..
    :)
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  • Varanasi RamabrahmamVaranasi Ramabrahmam (8/12/2009 7:09:00 PM)

    A very sensitive poem expressed through romantic sensuality. Full of mood and 'thirst' for love. Nice poem (Report)Reply

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