Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 200,855 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Wind Chill - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Eleven days ago, short sleeves, in the seventies
Sunshine and sweat while raking
Grass still green, marigolds a fiery orange
Moon lit night, comfortable to explore
Today’s trip to take out trash
Anything but routine
Crusty snow crunches and collapses
Swallowing ankles with a scrape
Northwest wind divests thermal layers
Single digits seem sub-zero
Exposed skin blushes blue

Topic(s) of this poem: life, nature

Comments about Wind Chill by Kelly Kurt

  • Wes Vogler (11/23/2015 5:52:00 PM)

    You wish
    There are always rules about poetry. But first you must entertain which you do very well here.
    This is a disciplined piece which could only be written after a lot of observation and thought. Oops my goofy mask slipped. Sometimes I speak as an elderly person.
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    Kelly Kurt (11/24/2015 12:02:00 AM)

    **Thanks, Wes. I do try to put a lot of thought into what I write. I know you aren't a fan of non-rhyming stuff. And it sounded like a wise person of any age

    Kelly Kurt (11/24/2015 12:01:00 AM)

    Thanks, Wes. I do try to put a lot of thought into what I write. I know you aren't a fan of non-rhyming stuff. And it sounded like a wise person of any age

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  • Pamela Sinicrope (11/23/2015 8:32:00 AM)

    Brrrrrr! The transition is swift in the Midwest! The NW wind does surely divest the thermal layers. Nice written. Thanks Kelly! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 10:45:00 AM)

    50 and rain for Thanksgiving.: -)

  • Marianne Reninger (11/23/2015 7:35:00 AM)

    snips and snaps of vibrant words create a painting. I'm there brother! Marianne Larsen Reninger (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 10:46:00 AM)

    Thank you, Marianne. I try.: -)

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/23/2015 7:19:00 AM)

    Green grasses in comfortable life pour glitter of softness of moonlight. Interesting imagery is drawn in this nice poem. This is exploring with theme. Comfortable reading we do....10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 10:47:00 AM)

    Comfortable reading, uncomfortable temperatures.: -)

  • Souren Mondal (11/23/2015 7:12:00 AM)

    Be careful Kelly, Queen Elsa's out of the bag! ! : p (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 4:58:00 PM)

    Thank you my friend. I did one better. Today I built an 8 foot tall snowman. My back kind of hurts but I had fun

    Souren Mondal (11/23/2015 11:36:00 AM)

    Yep, meanwhile keep singin' 'Let it Go' :)

    Happy winters Kelly...

    Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 10:49:00 AM)

    It takes four months to get her back in.: -)

  • (11/23/2015 2:44:00 AM)

    have fun but keep warm Kelly! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 10:50:00 AM)

    I plan to make a snowman as it gets above freezing. : -)

  • Rahman Henry (11/23/2015 2:26:00 AM)

    Lovely 'nature poem'.... I like this collage cut style of presenting a poem, Great work, dear poet! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 10:51:00 AM)

    That is one of the great things about poetry. No real rules as long as it resonates.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2015

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