Friday, October 31, 2008

Windows Comments

Rating: 4.7

Windows open vistas for us
Windows - of hearts, of minds or of eyes
Windows - which might open outward
Or inward

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
COMMENTS
Art Paul Schlosser 30 October 2018

Clever poem! I like the style your using here.

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Tanzila Rehmat 19 July 2018

This is the masterpiece! Just beautiful.

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Tanzila Rehmat 19 July 2018

What an excellent poem Nasir! Brilliant. When butterflies fly in front of windows Eyes glued to window panes become tearful With noontide memories.... you just plunged in the readers' hearts! I'm speechless!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 October 2017

A very beautiful poem..nicely penned. I quote..Windows converse They open the alphabetical locks of our lips When night weaves nets of darkness on windows Life-spans speak out in whispers from abysses of pain..the lines are absolutely fabulous. Congrats..! ! Thanks for sharing

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Rajendra Rout 26 September 2017

This word is very beautiful.i enjoy your poe

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2017

Beautiful poem having a comparison of window with human body. Captivating one. Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Chowdhury 17 September 2015

Very well expressed and a reflective write. Thanks for sharing.

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Jitesh Shah 05 April 2015

beautiful poem sir i like it and also read my poems sir

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Luo Zhihai 04 January 2015

I would like to translate your poems into Chinese. May I?

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Kelvin Karani 23 November 2013

This is a wonderful poem.... I think I'll have to re-read it though to fully appreciate the message.

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Stephanie Fiddy 10 October 2010

Beautiful poem! I believe our eyes are the windows to our soul! Great write 10^

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 September 2010

Great examples and comparisons! ! Windows and we are all windows..and we note and see all the wonders and terrible..sights.our hopes and dreams our failures and our passion......open windows. very well worded.

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Diana Newsome 20 August 2010

I am awe struck by your imagery. I feel taken by these words for there is gravity in each one. They follow the other perfectly, a symphony of great proportions...thank you for sharing.

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Gimi Trione 29 May 2010

It's an amazing poem that is completely honest

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Brittany Jones 10 May 2010

amazing diction and imagery..pleasure to read

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cheyenne briggs 27 April 2010

Very beautiful: D I like the how you worded it

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Sreekala Sukumaran 27 April 2010

I liked this poem very much every one's life should be transparent like a window...

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Beautiful comparison! We are all windows, we cannot help but to see all the wonderful and terrible sights that flit through our small worlds. And though impassive as they are, each instance touches us through open windows. And everything is released through open windows... Our hopes, dreams, fears... Spectacular translation

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Emeka Chunye 20 April 2010

Wow. a smashing exeunt.

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Lydia Wijnerman 14 April 2010

A nice one it remind us all to be like the open window and show transparency and honesty. Very good

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