Windows open vistas for us
Windows - of hearts, of minds or of eyes
Windows - which might open outward
Clever poem! I like the style your using here.
This is the masterpiece! Just beautiful.
What an excellent poem Nasir! Brilliant.
When butterflies fly in front of windows
Eyes glued to window panes become tearful
With noontide memories.... you just plunged in the readers' hearts! I'm speechless!
A very beautiful poem..nicely penned. I quote..Windows converse
They open the alphabetical locks of our lips
When night weaves nets of darkness on windows
Life-spans speak out in whispers from abysses of pain..the lines are absolutely fabulous. Congrats..! ! Thanks for sharing
This word is very beautiful.i enjoy your poe
Beautiful poem having a comparison of window with human body. Captivating one. Thanks for sharing.
Very well expressed and a reflective write. Thanks for sharing.
beautiful poem sir i like it and also read my poems sir
I would like to translate your poems into Chinese. May I?
This is a wonderful poem.... I think I'll have to re-read it though to fully appreciate the message.
Beautiful poem! I believe our eyes are the windows to our soul! Great write 10^
Great examples and comparisons! !
Windows and we are all windows..and we note and see all the wonders and terrible..sights.our hopes and dreams our failures and our passion......open windows. very well worded.
I am awe struck by your imagery. I feel taken by these words for there is gravity in each one. They follow the other perfectly, a symphony of great proportions...thank you for sharing.
It's an amazing poem that is completely honest
amazing diction and imagery..pleasure to read
Very beautiful: D I like the how you worded it
I liked this poem very much every one's life should be transparent like a window...
Beautiful comparison! We are all windows, we cannot help but to see all the wonderful and terrible sights that flit through our small worlds. And though impassive as they are, each instance touches us through open windows. And everything is released through open windows... Our hopes, dreams, fears... Spectacular translation
Wow. a smashing exeunt.
A nice one it remind us all to be like the open window and show transparency and honesty. Very good
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