Winter Awakening Poem by Lauro Marques

Winter Awakening



Today, I woke up and blindfolded, still,
I could not feel the beating of my pulse.
It was very dark yet
and only the singing of a solitary
bird
early bird
proved that I was still
alive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 18 August 2011

I feel cold freezing reading this..mean it was good :) be patient soon summer will come and winter will leave...the time when you will meet many birds out the sky to dance in the group...Good luck..keep flying with jacket in the winter hahaha joking! _Unwritten Soul

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Unwritten Soul 18 August 2011

I feel cold freezing reading this..mean it was good :) be patient soon summer will come and winter will leave...the time when you will meet many birds out the sky to dance in the group...Good luck..keep flying with jacket in the winter hahaha joking! _Unwritten Soul

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Lauro Marques 18 August 2011

Thank you, I am a 'short' poet, indeed.

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Cris Antro 18 August 2011

a next big one lovin it

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Lauro Marques 18 August 2011

Hi there, thank you for your comment. I'll try to follow your good advice. Greetings!

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Lauro Marques 18 August 2011

Hi there, thank you for your comment. I'll try to follow your good advice. Greetings!

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Unwritten Soul 18 August 2011

I feel cold freezing reading this..mean it was good :) be patient soon summer will come and winter will leave...the time when you will meet many birds out the sky to dance in the group...Good luck..keep flying with jacket in the winter hahaha joking! _Unwritten Soul

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