Dr Hitesh Sheth

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Winter (Haiku) - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

A Shadow of hard stone
shivers in the soft water
Icy winter night.
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  • (6/18/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    ALL OF IT WERE GOOD..TRY MY SENRYU'S TOO (Report)Reply

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  • (6/14/2009 3:38:00 PM)

    a wonderful poem with vivid images..10++++



    Womanly winter
    fails to cool off
    smouldering passion
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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (5/2/2009 2:09:00 AM)

    Womanly winter
    fails to cool off
    smouldering passion

    how much your thinking power goes!
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  • (4/27/2009 3:19:00 PM)

    Beautiful write, Dr. Sheth. Snowflakes are always falling in my soul.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (4/18/2009 2:13:00 AM)

    I loved this poem.If you're not too busy could you read 'Reflection' (Report)Reply

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  • (3/29/2009 8:03:00 AM)

    a nice winter poem, a deep provoking verses entwined....10 (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (2/24/2009 8:41:00 PM)

    good imageries...nice haiku combo, Hitesh...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Vinod Kumar (12/25/2008 1:58:00 AM)

    A winter snowfall....in my mind in the spring, Well done dear Dr. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/4/2008 11:54:00 PM)

    good personification of winter here.. :) (Report)Reply

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  • (12/4/2008 1:15:00 AM)

    Womanly winter
    fails to cool off
    smouldering passion.
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    Remarkable picture about winter in women.... Hitesh,10... from my.

    Best wishes,

    Tsira

    Tsira
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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (12/4/2008 12:33:00 AM)

    profound.............beautiful, thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • (12/1/2008 11:01:00 PM)

    that's short yet meaningful phrases..
    deeply affects me..
    great..
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  • (12/1/2008 8:50:00 AM)

    'Womanly winter
    fails to cool off
    smouldering passion '
    I like the winters semblance to woman
    and also the 'smouldering passion'
    great haiku
    A+ and 10+
    goes to my fav list
    regards anju
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  • (11/30/2008 6:46:00 AM)

    superb...............well done! ! (Report)Reply

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