Today mind is out of order
And heart is very heavy
Sorrow, I can not carry you any more
a beautiful wish in lovely metaphors, a delightful write.
Nice free flowing poem to present free wandering soul. Thank you.
This is a lovely poem Abdul, the heart want to be free.
excellent thoughts. as we all have these thoughts from time to time. heart at this moment wants to fly to an unknown land (somewhere in fantasy land.)
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like it, it has a thematic rhythm
Samuel Kim35 minutes ago
startling mature rhythm i liked it
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paul naragon34 minutes ago
This is very nicely expressed and a delight to read like a theraputic massage. Thanks for sharing.
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