Saturday, July 20, 2013

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Today mind is out of order
And heart is very heavy
Sorrow, I can not carry you any more

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Abdul Wahab
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Yasmin Khan 23 July 2013

a beautiful wish in lovely metaphors, a delightful write.

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Nice free flowing poem to present free wandering soul. Thank you.

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David Wood 22 July 2013

This is a lovely poem Abdul, the heart want to be free.

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Heather Wilkins 20 July 2013

excellent thoughts. as we all have these thoughts from time to time. heart at this moment wants to fly to an unknown land (somewhere in fantasy land.)

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Wahab Abdul 20 July 2013

collected comment from elsewhere like it, it has a thematic rhythm Samuel Kim35 minutes ago startling mature rhythm i liked it

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Wahab Abdul 20 July 2013

a comment from elsewhere paul naragon34 minutes ago This is very nicely expressed and a delight to read like a theraputic massage. Thanks for sharing.

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