Nur'ayn (new reign)

Rookie - 5 Points (29th January,1990 / Lagos, Nigeria)

Without You (Is A Dream Coming True) - Poem by Nur'ayn (new reign)

Without you is a dream coming true
A dream I never had but yet is coming true
Should I call it my destiny to be without you?
When the only light in my life is the sun that's you.

What purpose is life without you?
What chance do I have to ever forget you?
To never make it rain on my weakened cheeks
Whenever a single memory of yours from my head leaks.

The sun is too weak to suppress the nightly darkness
And the flowers in my garden have lost their alluring freshness
Even when I laugh and act like a worriless clown
Without you, my lifeguard, my heart will surely drown.

I hate being alive and breathing without you
And lying to my heart is all I am left to continue to do
I crashed the very moment I never had but lost your heart
Never to rise and stand like a higher creature on God's earth.

Comments about Without You (Is A Dream Coming True) by Nur'ayn (new reign)

  • G. Akanji Olaniyi (1/18/2016 8:46:00 AM)

    Love is wicked but it is also sweet. Nice work! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Neela Nath Das (9/25/2012 11:28:00 PM)

    A Love Lost Heart's tale, a story of earnest love. Beautiful! If I could write like you! (Report) Reply

  • Philo Yan (9/19/2012 5:47:00 AM)

    A very strong write about lost love. (Report) Reply

  • (9/17/2012 12:45:00 PM)

    Sad and moving, but you will start anew. A rather vivid portrayel of unrequieted love.Just
    pour your emotions into your poetry
    (Report) Reply

  • Akingbehin Daniel Murphy (8/4/2012 2:54:00 PM)

    dis really intresting (Report) Reply

  • (7/16/2012 5:29:00 AM)

    A sad feeling of love that is being lost very good idea to bring it to the for thru a dream with emotion thanks...regards (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (7/15/2012 11:32:00 AM)

    Revealing whole heart on poetry in each dropp of ink, this look honest and give all to a know the life is not meaning anything as if you losing that true? remember who give birth to u, do u think your family raise you for nothing are something to them and someone that you need to find...more than just a person who struggle with feeling...Life is not just having a breathe and breathing alive....Survive your soul for who care you, and accept you dont sacrifice to whoever that hurt you_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Zoya Khalid (4/27/2012 3:00:00 PM)

    It's a nightmare come true....very expressive and touching. (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2012 5:38:00 PM)

    quite good. full of complex emotion (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2012 11:47:00 AM)

    There is so much sadness here but also miles of passion. Great write. Hope you get what you want most. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 4, 2012

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