Monday, July 13, 2009

Wondering Why.... Comments

Rating: 5.0
Why have I been deserted? when others herd together
Why do I have to stand naked under scorching sun? alone?
Why have I faced the coldest storm that needle my skin to blue?
Why does a deluge leave me drenched and storm put me off my feet

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Aparna Sinha
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 September 2009
a very deep seeded poem...the closing lines are brilliant...very true the soul is left with you to take care of you.....10
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Surya . 25 September 2009
strength of soul is an assurance in life. a good poem starting with 'why'.the concluding para is very good. voted10 surya
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Afzal Shauq 25 September 2009
Why my hands assure me when I want consolation Why my feet hold me to ground and never let me fall Why my will still tie me to mother earth My soul is one with its people..with you... your repeated why has no answers but yes there are many answers if we do think of reality and observe wahts in fornt of your eyes...reality is yourmain theme and how you write is hearfelt and soul touching..very sweet and great idea..meaningful and professionally written..liked it very much 10/10
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Sanjib Das 18 September 2009
WOOOW IT'S A GREAT POEM. I DEDICATE THIS FOR YOUR POETIC QUALITY; YOU WEAVE WONDER OF WONDERS I READ THE POEM WITH JOY, I AM YOUR ADMIRER OF ADMIRERS WITH MY HEART, I ENJOY.
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Anand Madhukar 17 September 2009
Some questions are better left unanswered. A beautiful write.
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Siddharth Singh 14 July 2009
Really beautiful! deserves a standing ovation, this one.
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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 July 2009
this is a wonderful world! we live in wonders! and your compostion is wonderful! very touchy! 10+
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Indira Babbellapati 13 July 2009
u r a poet in every sense of the word...
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C. P. Sharma 13 July 2009
A genuine cry for the mother Earth and the atricities committed on its people. Penned with love for Nature and great human touch. CP
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