Thursday, January 13, 2005

World Comments

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theres a world outside of mine
but you know, sometimes i forget
to stop and take a look around
i get so caught up in 'me' (and yet)
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Cheryl Adair
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Cliff Morman 13 January 2005

I think thats pretty neat its got flow and a lot of meaning that some people might be able to grasp I know from self exprience but I bet you wish you had those notebooks back I wish I had mine! ! C. M.

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Poetry Hound 13 January 2005

You're almost 50 and you're just realizing this now? Better late than never to stop being self-absorbed. Somehow I think it's just a passing thought and you're not really going to go out of your way to do anything differently.

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Cheryl Adair

Cheryl Adair

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