Friday, January 3, 2003

Wot A Pair Comments

Rating: 3.2

I waz walking down Wyefront street
When me trousers ran away,
I waz feeling incomplete
But still me trousers would not stay,

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Benjamin Zephaniah
COMMENTS
Pamela Lutwyche 25 May 2021

Funny poem. My kind of style. Bet your shoes had something to say. I like it brilliant.

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Victory 26 January 2021

but it is good

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Victory 26 January 2021

wht does the poem mean

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Ossie Thomas 08 December 2020

Lyrically great

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Khairul Ahsan 31 October 2020

An imaginative and witty poem, loved it. Congratulations on its selection as the 'Modern Poem of the Day'!

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 October 2020

Me trousers did not believe a single word I had to say, And me underpants were laughing When me trousers ran away. ////it's difficult to understand; I think, allegorically this poem was written on the natives; Sometimes even subordinates do not want to listen to true leaders; They keep running after the unknown illusions which are never going to happen; Eventually they lost their existence////

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 October 2020

Me trousers did not believe a single word I had to say, And me underpants were laughing When me trousers ran away. interesting poem. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2020

Giving promise for protection is a nice duty. An amazing poem is chosen as modern poem of the day.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 October 2020

Amazing and hilarious poem, Benjamin! I have enjoyed a very lot. Thank you for sharing these amazing words full of barren humor! CONGRATULATIONS on the choice of Poem Hunter and Team. and many more! God's Blessings.Greatest for you and your wonderful family! 5 Stars Full Vote! Best wishes from Sylvia from The Netherlands.

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harry 29 September 2020

this is a beatiful poem

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Kevin Patrick 22 June 2020

! Im in love with the wit of this poem! , a stellar work of cleverness of a brilliant mind. So glad this is modern poem of the day!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 June 2020

When me trousers ran away...., ..taking this line you have delineated a meaningful and beautiful poem with humor. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the modern poem of the day.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 June 2020

Me trousers did not believe a single word I had to say, And me underpants were laughing When me trousers ran away. strange and interesting at the same time. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 June 2020

It's a great satire on racism..... Ironically written....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 June 2020

Amazing and hilarious poem, Benjamin! I have enjoyed a very lot. Thank you for sharing this impressive poem full of barren humor! CONGRATULATIONS on the choice of Poem Hunter and Team. God's Blessings. A full 10++++++++ and much much more. Sylvia FC from The Lowlands

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Varsha M 22 June 2020

A sweet lovely poetry. A unique version. Well written.

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itsame toderto 22 June 2020

good it is very imagenative! ??????

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Good man 21 May 2020

Gooooooooooooooooood

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Bill Cantrell 12 January 2020

Dat be dim dar words, me tinkin dis funny cuz me laughed

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 January 2020

mine would stand up ma'am if mine underwear ran along with ma pants trousers attention read some of ma poems moms smiles

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