Y... Calling Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y... Calling

Rating: 5.0


A calling can be so strong
It makes us move away
A calling can be so strong

We move away for long
From our loved ones
We move away for long

We miss our loved ones
But our calling is so strong
We miss our loved ones

Our calling can be strong
Following our calling can hurt
But it can be oh so strong.

Following our calling can hurt
But isn't it our soul's desire?
It may be worth the hurt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 25 February 2012

In just for a call we heal the miss and we fall from tall when the one is calling closer awake soul's desire or burn in fire It may be worth the hurt or sweetest bleed recalled And that's why a calling can be so strong when the loved ones move away for long ].....just try to continue_Unwritten Soul

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Martin O'Neill 27 February 2012

Aufie, this is inspirational. So many people I believe are only half of what they could be if they would follow their hearts rather than what is expected of them.

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Spiritual Seeker 28 February 2012

Another of your gem Hans...pain and labour will deliver the sweetest baby! I like the 3 lines...A 10.

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Sindiswa S. Mnguni C'ndy 15 November 2012

wow.....sowi friend i have been busy with the exams at skul but now am done although will dissapear alot since i will be at home but will check up on you guys...... yah this is another calling yoh....the home cuming ha ha ha lovely one man! ! !

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Jinal Oswal 28 March 2012

A calling can really be hard... it can soak you in tears.. its can bring in fears... it can bring back the passion.. it can do wonders... A very nice subject.

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Pheko Motaung 06 March 2012

A beautiful awesome inspirational poem.Thanks you very much

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(De Va) 06 March 2012

How very profound. How very grand that you see it and point it out....we do have to follow when we are called, or...we fail our own destiny...blessings

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

well crafted and well said, very nice poem indeed!

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