Wednesday, July 16, 2008

You Lie Comments

Rating: 4.9
One day in autumn day we met
The smell of the winter was near
And the leaves of the trees were wet
We were alone under the pines trees

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Yasser Koor
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*Smile4ever* 07 May 2009
Very touching.. But brother do u think u can curse the one u love.. Naa u can't because its u only who loved her so lot.. But it pains so much when u remind her second by second.. Is'nt? God bless u smile4ever
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tara star 02 May 2009
I hate lairs...these ppl never deserve any one's love...and i think this single poem can make them realize their mistake...i kindly liked it...
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Sundos Mohammad 07 December 2008
realllyy greaaaaaat! ! u seems deeply hurted! ! ! ! ! ! sry for that! ! keep it up! ! thnks for sharing it! !
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Monlano Kim 26 November 2008
Has some real depth and hatred. So much emotion! I love the last part! !
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Anjali Sinha 08 November 2008
'Listen …….. I know it was a fault To praise my love for you The only thing you really love Is yourself, yourself and you' such a fitting finale to your poem i loved the ending. ++++++++10 regards anju
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Kesav Easwaran 26 October 2008
a poetic judgement on an insincere love...gives interesting reading...9
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Little Hatila ;) 10 October 2008
You said 'I love you' But you lied i don't know why people don't mean it sometimes when they say these three innocent words 'i love you' extremely well done....keep going...10 Hataw
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Sarah Abdullah 04 October 2008
Listen …….. I know it was a fault To praise my love for you The only thing you really love Is yourself, yourself and you Fine lines....eternal Love is over rated and no matter how many time it is said It never comes true...Sad yet True
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Shimon Weinroth 25 September 2008
alas love is too often a fickle emotion and there might not necessarily have been an intent to decieve, this is a passionate poem with unrequited love and compassion, a romantic filled with emotions and notions
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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008
'Listen …….. I know it was a fault To praise my love for you The only thing you really love Is yourself, yourself and you' nice observation.
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sara }i{ 03 August 2008
I really like this poem alot and it's really show your feelings good job, peace and love ;)
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Elaine O' Keeffe 16 July 2008
I know the feeling well.
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