Your eyes are like a ocean,
Your hiar is the waves that lift the ocean,
Your heart is the core of the animal ocean that feels it up with love for the lovely ocean
The ammount of grammatical mistakes in this poem makes it very hard to concentrate on the poem itself. Please revise this poem and your grammatical skills before considering posting again.
hey buddy, I believe your title should be You're Like an Ocean just in the name of grammar purely, but other than that it was a good read :)
i really enjoyed reading this poem.
it made me smile and thats hard to do these days.
thank you you have real talent
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