Thursday, November 13, 2008

Your Like A Ocean Comments

Rating: 3.0

Your eyes are like a ocean,
Your hiar is the waves that lift the ocean,
Your heart is the core of the animal ocean that feels it up with love for the lovely ocean


clayton moore
Dick Muncher 07 April 2013

The ammount of grammatical mistakes in this poem makes it very hard to concentrate on the poem itself. Please revise this poem and your grammatical skills before considering posting again.

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Calico Jack 23 April 2012

hey buddy, I believe your title should be You're Like an Ocean just in the name of grammar purely, but other than that it was a good read :)

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M.j. Henderson 03 August 2011

i really enjoyed reading this poem. it made me smile and thats hard to do these days. thank you you have real talent

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