Saturday, October 5, 2013

Your Smile Comments

Rating: 4.4
O breathe a word
or two of fire
smile as if those words
should burn me


Rigzin Namgyal
Romeo Della Valle 01 January 2014
Powerful! A deep and touching write that clearly shows your talent and great feelings magically filtered through this thought provoking write! 10+++ I really enjoy it and I hope you keep it up! Please, keep enriching the Poetry World with more of your inspirational works! If time permits, please, check my latest posted poem titled: Poetic Justice and I hope you like it and enjoy! Regards from New York City
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Vipins Puthooran 25 October 2013
to say 'tis a magnum opus/ well-done! !
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Hezekiah Toheeb Tiamiyu 20 October 2013
nice poem....well smiley written
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Payal Parande 19 October 2013
Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around. beautiful sir well done
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Persian Khushi 13 October 2013
yes am smiling too. A fantastic write!
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Neetha Sasidharan 10 October 2013
hats off man...hats off....jst grt....superb.....such a grt poem on such a simple yet romantic topic.....go on......
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Allemagne Roßmann 06 October 2013
lot of fresh energy in the smile
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Unwritten Soul 06 October 2013
I sealed my poem with my it never down for you but smile forever :) _SOul
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Heather Wilkins 06 October 2013
a smile can enchant many. As in your poem turn into sadness. A lovely write with good imagery.
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Hazel Durham 06 October 2013
A smile has a power to hypnotize and enchant, you have beautifully expressed such a smile with a sad ending! Superb write!
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Neela Nath Das 06 October 2013
Wow! Thousand ships will get drowned if they see this smile. Exaggerated beauty........Simply fabulous.10 +++
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Patricia Grantham 05 October 2013
A radiant smile can do wonders to those around you. A smile is just a frown turned upside down. It takes more wrinkles to frown than to smile. When you smiling th whole world smiles with you. keep smiling and keep penning. Enjoyed.
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