Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 197,795 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Zeal - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Zigzag is our lives’ path,
Zeal you take never wrath.
Zing you will get meditate God,
Zappy you will be avoiding fraud.

Zeal you take in every work,
Zeal can remove pain and murk.
Zephyr will give you so much joy,
Zealot you won’t be nor be coy.

Zillion and zillion vigour you get,
Zappy you gain have trusty mate.
Zest you do keep in mind,
Zonked life is difficult, be kind.

Zap your greed, have charity,
Zeal you hold with deep purity.
Zinnia like you will be nice,
Zeal you mustn’t have in dice.
(Glossary= Zing-vitality, Zephyr – gentle breeze, Zealot-fanatic, Zonked-fatigued)

Topic(s) of this poem: advise, life, spirit, spiritual

Form: Rhyme Royal or Rime Royale

Comments about Zeal by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 8:41:00 PM)

    Feedback received
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    xI enjoyed it dear Kumarmani. Bravo.......
    17 Nov 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

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    xWow amazingly divine My dear friend I miss you! ! ! ! Tfs tfr hugs and many many blessings my dear friend XOXOXO XOXOXO XOXOXO
    17 Nov 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

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    xLovely play of word! I could never think of having so much fun with words of z. Thank you for share!
    18 Nov 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply

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    xAmazing game! TFS
    18 Nov 2015 by Bipin Churchung Rabha | Reply

    picture of Amal Al jashemi
    xVery beautiful poem.I love it.
    18 Nov 2015 by Amal Al jashemi | Reply

    picture of Dorothy A. Holmes
    xMy pleasure to read! Thought provoking! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
    21 Nov 2015 by Dorothy A. Holmes | Reply

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    xCreative and much enjoyed :)
    22 Nov 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply

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    xOh you are a true poet, so best with words, any word but yet still playful in the best meaning for the sake of poetry. Long live sheer poetry from the heart but also very skilful and artful poetically worded. My grand compliments. God's Blessings in Abundance.....I cite your third line: Zing you will get meditate God....yes indeed it's time for me to do that. The best way to do on this european morning. Thank you so much for this precious enjoyable read.
    23 Nov 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply

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    xGood wordplay and solid message, Well written.
    23 Nov 2015 by Mizzy.. | Reply

    picture of Rohan *******
    xquite a wise message you shared with us through your beautiful verse dear sir....thank you very much
    26 Nov 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply

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    xcreative wordplay...very much enjoyed the read
    28 Nov 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply
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  • Robert Murray Smith (11/28/2016 11:53:00 PM)

    A fine poem of zeal, and zing we need to sing.+++10 (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina (11/17/2015 4:19:00 AM)

    Oh my God! I need to read vocabulary, letter Z! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Pithy Marvel (11/16/2015 11:10:00 PM)

    Zat was zuper-duper

    I zank you very much
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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/16/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    Zigzag is our lives’ path,
    All praise to Him, the beneficent and merciful, show me the straight path of truth, path of those you were pleased with them, not path of those you were displeased with them, ....................they read it at least 98 times during the twenty four hours in their prayers but they read it like a parrot! I wish they would have read it only once in their lives but with their heart and soul!
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/16/2015 8:02:00 AM)

    Zzuper....Superb...Only u can write such wonderful poem using single letter words.....Thanks Sir,10
    Zap your greed, have charity,
    Zeal you hold with deep purity.
    Zinnia like you will be nice,
    Zeal you mustn’t have in dice.
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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/16/2015 5:49:00 AM)

    beautiful poem every line begins with Z, a beautiful style, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 16, 2015

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