Putholi Arumugham
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Real Reason
Oh my love, I could marry someone else
As you always advice, with so much ease.
But you know, for his every touch
My lips by reflex shall pronounce-
Only your sweetest name,
bringing me so much shame.
Putholi, I like your train of creative thought and economy of style. The only advise I'd offer is, write from the heart but edit from the head. Warmly, Jerry