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Putholi Arumugham
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Severity Of Your Silence
Heat a rod red hot
press it into my eyes so hard.
Then with your lark voice,
you can very well ask
Does it hurt dear?
that shall be million times better
then this cruelty of your silence
which kills me in seconds.
Putholi, I like your train of creative thought and economy of style. The only advise I'd offer is, write from the heart but edit from the head. Warmly, Jerry