Rachel Ann Clark
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* Story: 'The Oppressed Angel'
- 5. Feb.2008 -
** I would like comment on whether or not I should bother finishing this... This is the pre-chapter 1. I will write in chapters and if people like each I will add another until the story is done... Your comments are valued.
The Oppressed Angel – by Rachel
In the silence of the empty night thoughts ran their way through her mind like a freight train; pounding loudly in her head. She couldn’t escape them. Her nerves fluttered like one hundred fearful butterflies and her heartbeat played hopscotch with her body. There was no ...
- 28. Oct.2006 -
She sat there with a smile plastered bravely to her face
No one knew her only hope for living was living in her faith
They didn’t know it as they watched her as she worked away in class
Didn’t know it as they watched her and they never even asked.
One day they saw her decline, her hopeless looking eyes