Raffael PonceValencia

Rookie (11-1994 / San Jose, Ca)

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  • Adeline Foster Adeline Foster (1/10/2014 3:49:00 PM)

    Ah, you seem to have not yet discovered the trick of commenting on poems. I do hope you do, since we would all like to hear from you.
    Adeline

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My Father's Hands

In his hands sometimes lays the snow.
Often times he lets the flakes breathe upon the receiving warmth of his knuckles.
They lay there for a second or two,
They stare up into his eyes, and with a thankful silent nod; they melt away.
They melt away grateful.

In his hands sometimes lays the fire.
Often times he lets her resist the force of his lifting palms.
Palms resisting each other.

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