Rain Storm

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  • Phantom Anonymous (5/18/2006 11:38:00 PM)

    I absolutely looooooooooooooove your style. your poetry is soooooo tangeble. keep it up, i'm looking foward to more stuff from u

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  • Phantom Anonymous (5/18/2006 11:29:00 PM)

    I really like this poet's style u kinda remind me of a more suttle kind of poetry..........keep it up i'll check u out more regulaly now that i see your talent.

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Theres a gentle song to your stressful day,
When the sultriness of rolling wind can't be turned away.
What a captivating moment
And it sees me through,
Its enough for this girl just to want to be with you.

And do you see this moment,
It is vivid and clear,
Its enough for me that you're right here.