Sameer Ahmed

Rookie (08/17/1986 / Pakistan)

Comments about Sameer Ahmed

  • Narender Singh Bansal (8/5/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    Your Poem 'An Ocean Within ' in respect of your father, shows the insight of his life along with your worries about old age quite nicely.
    Your narration that he still has dreams shows the lively spirit within him and the journey he has been through and will surely carry on.

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  • Ana Sanchez Ana Sanchez (8/4/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    Sameer, this poem brings tears to my eyes..so well put and inspiring. its like i feel your strong gesture to ur father...he is your back bone and therefore..u needed to create something for him..I'm sure he is proud of a talented poet..Congrats my friend

  • Amira Amin (3/31/2009 6:10:00 AM)

    WAKE UP.Its a wonderful piece AMIRA

  • TD Euwaite (1/14/2009 12:45:00 PM)

    I like these new ones. You should send them to our poetry contest.

    http: //www.poetsofmars.com

First Beautiful Rain

I could see from the window
Light losing it's consciousness
With fading sunshine.
The green cheering rhythmically
Along the gentle breeze
And waiting eagerly
To enjoy freedom from the dirt.
Black and white fluffy giant-like clouds
Taking control over the sky

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