Sameer Ahmed

Rookie (08/17/1986 / Pakistan)

Comments about Sameer Ahmed

  • Narender Singh Bansal (8/5/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    Your Poem 'An Ocean Within ' in respect of your father, shows the insight of his life along with your worries about old age quite nicely.
    Your narration that he still has dreams shows the lively spirit within him and the journey he has been through and will surely carry on.

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  • Ana Sanchez Ana Sanchez (8/4/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    Sameer, this poem brings tears to my eyes..so well put and inspiring. its like i feel your strong gesture to ur father...he is your back bone and therefore..u needed to create something for him..I'm sure he is proud of a talented poet..Congrats my friend

  • Amira Amin (3/31/2009 6:10:00 AM)

    WAKE UP.Its a wonderful piece AMIRA

  • TD Euwaite (1/14/2009 12:45:00 PM)

    I like these new ones. You should send them to our poetry contest.

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Wake Up!

Wake up!
From your unyielding prestige
That made you abortive
And you turned into a nefarious sculpt.

Wake up!
From your morbid thoughts
That made you an introvert
And you became a virulent foe of your own flesh.

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