Sarah2 McMahon


Biography of Sarah2 McMahon

Hi. My name is Sarah. I am currently 17 and I am a soon-to-be senior in high school. I was always looking for a site to get constructive criticism of my work and actually just get my work read. If you look at the source of all of my poems except one (The Fire Inside, which was written by my friend Tim) it will say 'By Me' or 'An original poem by me'. All of these poems were written by me and only me. I hope to get some comments on them someday because I want to hear what you guys think. Please don't be hesitant to say something you don't like about it! It's all things I can learn and think about while I'm writing my next poems! :) Thank you so much.

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Sadness

Sadness, it locks up my soul and shuts my world down.
I sit here with an invisible crown,
of clouds.
When my body lies down the clouds form over me and start to rain,
but there is a world lieing below me that i want to change.
I start to wimper, I start to cry,
until i realize that bottled up inside
Is a scared child named sadness caged up, within.
Who dares not to dream and shades our eyes.

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