Biography of Sarah2 McMahon
Hi. My name is Sarah. I am currently 17 and I am a soon-to-be senior in high school. I was always looking for a site to get constructive criticism of my work and actually just get my work read. If you look at the source of all of my poems except one (The Fire Inside, which was written by my friend Tim) it will say 'By Me' or 'An original poem by me'. All of these poems were written by me and only me. I hope to get some comments on them someday because I want to hear what you guys think. Please don't be hesitant to say something you don't like about it! It's all things I can learn and think about while I'm writing my next poems! :) Thank you so much.
Sarah2 McMahon's Works:
I don't have any of those quite yet. :)
Sarah2 McMahon Poems
As they float down on this cool autumn night.
There's not telling where they will land
As they wisp through the air and flow near a band,
Beating on sad souls.
Where snow runs deep on the ground outside,
Compacting under our feet.
The fire has grown too large
And devours my being whol.
Though beats of remorse could ring through.
The airs of the dreamer fill up the night
As their dream ship sails into the blue.
That I dare not travel back,
This road so dark, dim, and blue,
Sadness, it locks up my soul and shuts my world down.
I sit here with an invisible crown,
When my body lies down the clouds form over me and start to rain,
but there is a world lieing below me that i want to change.
I start to wimper, I start to cry,
until i realize that bottled up inside
Is a scared child named sadness caged up, within.
Who dares not to dream and shades our eyes.