Shamin Bashir Shah

Rookie (31st March 1995 / Lahore)

Comments about Shamin Bashir Shah

  • rooba royale (8/10/2011 10:49:00 AM)

    intellignt brains my frnd... <3 nice poems n story...: P u alyz hd it in u

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  • Rafiq Sandeelvi Rafiq Sandeelvi (8/10/2011 6:46:00 AM)

    Young brains have a fresh energy if they utilize it.I appreciate that you are utilizing your energy to create poetry in younger age..Hope it ll help to trace the meanings of your existence in this world.
    You are a good poetess.If reader try he can enter into your river of vivid expressions, view a tide of sadness and grief of woman existence in your poems and easily unfold the hidden incident or sensitive turn in your life overwhelming your soul, body and mind...but in my opinion reader should not completely relate your poetry with biographical back ground and not consider you as first person singular or protagonist of your poems...No doubt sorrows of woman are vast but she has many faces and inner worlds you can depict in your poetry.Hope you ll explore new windows in future.

As I Gaze Upon The World

Whenever I see the world around me
I see the terrible sights around me
I see children working around me
I see people, starving to death around me
I see burnt houses around me
But I can't do anything to stop this around me
Most importantly I see people
Crying for peace around me
As I raise my voice for plea

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