Sharmeen Azam

Rookie (Victoria, Canada)

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  • Sofiul Azam (5/21/2005 4:11:00 AM)

    Sharmeen,

    Your poems are epitomes of the passionate intensity that you probably grew up with in your Urdu-speaking country. Sometimes you kind of yield to unfulfilling the proper quota of careful attention that is needed for the birth of every poem. Anyway, you are certainly a poet who I think will take poetry as seriously as any great one often does.

    Sofiul Azam

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Solstice

Aurora borealis playing across the mountaintops.
This gaping mouth tremble at its majesty.
Strewn along the navy blue sky,
Carat-sized stars with open arms
hoping I hear their calling.
Beautiful darkness interrupted,
fireflies in mating dance.

Pining breeze whispers she’s lonely,

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