Shauna Stoltz

Rookie (03/02/1990 / Washington)

Shauna Stoltz Poems

41. Basketball 3/30/2007

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  • Oscar Thistle Oscar Thistle (6/21/2016 9:48:00 PM)

    this poem is inspiring. thankyou for putting it up. NOT

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  • Michael Fischer (3/30/2007 5:31:00 PM)

    'My Heart' is a good poem. But as you progress as a writer, you want to try to avoid cliches and use more creative metaphors and smilies. For example, 'every time I see you, my heart melts away' could be written 'my heart melts like a lit candle when you grace me with your Romeo-like presence' or something like that. But it comes with time. Good luck!
    -Michael

Best Poem of Shauna Stoltz

Basketball

I use to love basketball
I would play it everyday
In the summer and spring
in the winter and fall

I would find some way
to play or dribble
I love the taste of it
even just a nibble

I would go to camps
and play all day
Just me, friends, and a basketball
we all loved to play

I'd win ribbons and awards
I loved the sport of basketball
every year I couldn't wait
Basketball in the fall

I was on teams for three years
then I had a coach
who made me hate the game
the game I loved so much

I wont say her name
but it was ...

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Cancer

The school year came and went
I wanted to do more
but summer was almost spent
We got a call from my sister
tears rolling down faces
she had brest cancer
she couldn't go many places
our hearts were weaping
we feard for the worst

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