Shauna Stoltz

Rookie (03/02/1990 / Washington)

Shauna Stoltz Poems

41. You'Ve Helped Me 3/30/2007

Comments about Shauna Stoltz

  • Oscar Thistle Oscar Thistle (6/21/2016 9:48:00 PM)

    this poem is inspiring. thankyou for putting it up. NOT

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  • Michael Fischer (3/30/2007 5:31:00 PM)

    'My Heart' is a good poem. But as you progress as a writer, you want to try to avoid cliches and use more creative metaphors and smilies. For example, 'every time I see you, my heart melts away' could be written 'my heart melts like a lit candle when you grace me with your Romeo-like presence' or something like that. But it comes with time. Good luck!
    -Michael

Best Poem of Shauna Stoltz

That's My School

Up at my school
everyone is different
yet we are treated
like an equal

everyone is always smiling
or laughing so hard
they start to cry
that's my school

a lot of people
go through my school
home of the blue jays
to cool for school

standing tall upon the hill
behind all the trees
stands the blue jay's school
yup, that's my school

each person is unique
form the clothes
to the hair
to their personality

each person is free
to express themselves
and be who they want
that's my school

WHS blue jay ...

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Basketball

I use to love basketball
I would play it everyday
In the summer and spring
in the winter and fall

I would find some way
to play or dribble
I love the taste of it
even just a nibble

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