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Silentpoet Grl
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A Cry For Help
collapsed in tears of pain
so lost in heavy confusion
how did things get so messed up
Please help me now is all i can say
God, hear my cries and see my tears
this is not what i wanted
i begged for it to not happen this way
so unsure i am of many things
i am still so young
i just cant handle this
so if you are there
know i am crying out in desperation
Please save me from my pain
but there is just an empty silence all around
Please, i don't want to be lost and so alone
Are you there? Are you even real?
waiting for answers i can only think
maybe...
Forgotten Face
do you see the girl standing all alone
how she hides behind that smile
she awkwardly pulls down her sleeve
not wanting anyone to see the cuts or bruises
that small laugh and simple conversation
joking around to keep the talk simple
to avoid whats really on her mind.
escaping the painful memories,
she swallows more pills
Thinking about you Liz dont know how to contact you. I hope you are well. p63rodriguez@gmail.com we use to chat on yahoo Art was my nickname lol
I hope all is well for you Liz, your writing is beautiful, I hope it only continues to take you so far! ! The world is yours, you understand it more than most, and with that power, you can change so much. Truly one of the greatest inspirations! I really do hope I see so much more, never give up, because it's you who kept me going!
Miss you my friend...
Silent Poet Girl...The composer of- Completely Broken, Crimson Tears, Blank Page, -and many more poems of gentle as well as dark nature...is wonderful at one major feature of her writing style n that is...The Economy Of Expression; the terseness....the liquid flow of thought can never stop, if she doesn't wish so....really a poet with a style! ! !
Silent poet grl has a unique voice. Her poems are a “bright red scream” of anguish that pour out her soul and question the meaning of love, hate and existence. I recommend that everyone read this first rate poetess.
Silentpoet Grl you do strip mine the highs and lows for us. I see years of successful writing for you with greater intensities of life and love. Thanks for your hard work and being a circle of hope and inspiration.
When you read Silentpoet Grl's work you cannot help but feel as if you are there, or experiencing the very thing she is writing about. Very vivid images of sadness and horror, but with shards of hope and a love for life throughout. She is also a very kind and friendly person who has great advice and critiques on your work. Keep writing dearest SPG. :)
Nice incisive poem showing your every pain the way potry should. To always show how the loss of love should truly feel.
Wow very hard hitting. Finally free
Morbidly great!
She's an amazing writter, very descriptive, some very emotional, a nice girl, and she has talent. I hope you have a nice new year, and have a great year in 2012. (: