Skylar Beet

Rookie (October 28 1995 / Myanmar)

Comments about Skylar Beet

  • Louis Kasatkin (1/7/2012 3:29:00 AM)

    Dark-It was good of you to provide guidance for yopur reader in the footnote.The tone and style of this poem reminded me of the narrative songs of The Hold Steady.Urban alienation etc. The only editorial advice I can give is try and avoid extended lines, stick to 6 words per line.

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  • Skylar Beet (1/4/2012 7:26:00 AM)

    What do you think? :) hoped you liked it :) THANKS for reading

In Rage!

I am stunned! ... I am stunned!
How could you!
I thought you were what I needed,
I trusted you!
I gave you my all!
Your evil, wicked, sly scheme worked, didn’t it?
Your just like one of them, arnt you?
A back stabbing, heartless, repulsive inconsiderate fool!
What was i thinking!

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