Skylar Beet

Rookie (October 28 1995 / Myanmar)

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  • Louis Kasatkin Louis Kasatkin (1/7/2012 3:29:00 AM)

    Dark-It was good of you to provide guidance for yopur reader in the footnote.The tone and style of this poem reminded me of the narrative songs of The Hold Steady.Urban alienation etc. The only editorial advice I can give is try and avoid extended lines, stick to 6 words per line.

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  • Skylar Beet (1/4/2012 7:26:00 AM)

    What do you think? :) hoped you liked it :) THANKS for reading

Fire Of The Holy Spirit!

FIRE! FIRE! consume in ME!
Holy Fire stir up, be free
IGNITE the living FIRE!
That my soul DESIRES
Holy Spirit, who I can not see
I welcome you inside of me
you are my guidance and my conscience
our relationship is supernatural tense
Holy Spirit you make me different

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