subodh pandey

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  • Susan Eltone (8/7/2012 12:31:00 PM)

    The Other Tranparency; Good use of metaphor, nicely done. Stay in Touch, Eltone

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  • Wabi Sabi Wabi Sabi (2/7/2012 5:49:00 AM)

    you are a beautiful writer. you provokes me into what it is like about what you have written, bringing fantasy.

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  • Simran Arora (1/2/2012 7:21:00 AM)

    u r born 2 b a poet.

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At the distant old lake
Your reflection wavers on wandering waves
In the limitless enmity of past
your eyebrows are arched in anticipation
as if raised by the pallid moon
the pure and sanguine jealousy
glides over the undulating water
cold breeze unveils the hidden spaces
draped with, you drown in fear

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