Susan Alldred Lugton

Rookie - 365 Points (1946 / Dunedin New Zealand)

Comments about Susan Alldred Lugton

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (11/14/2016 12:10:00 PM)

    I have read a couple of poems written by Susan Alldred Lugton and found then quite interesting and nicely carved. The subjects have been taken from our daily life and have been treated with aesthetic care. Her poetry presents a mosaic of different shades of human nature that one learns from experience. I wish her good health and many more years of creative writing.

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  • David Keig (4/19/2011 6:22:00 AM)

    please get in touch with me

    d xxx

  • Michael Shepherd (5/24/2005 7:43:00 AM)

    Hi! As a silly-billy myself, loved your sillyness poem, and wanted to suggest:
    'so sweetly' for one of the 'completely' s; and
    in the last line 'for forty winks'...

    Michael

Two Doves In Love

I noticed something in the park today,
Two sweet little doves involved. in play.
They sauntered around just a foot apart,
as if something was about to start

His feathers ruffled, almost on end.
She flirted, danced, saying my love I send.
They met and kissed with their beaks entwined.
I watched, enchanted, it filled my mind.

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