tanvi damle

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Comments about tanvi damle

  • Hank Moody (3/21/2012 6:57:00 AM)

    So many love and heart break poems, you and Adele would get along well.

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  • Murphy Payne (3/14/2011 11:39:00 PM)

    I think this poem is excellent. It rhymes and flows. The very way I like reading poetry. Good Job

  • Dr Sunil Mishra (3/17/2010 9:22:00 AM)

    Well, the lines are really overflow of your powerful emotions, sensitivity and sensibility. It seems to me you could not recollect the ideas/feelings completely at the time of writing.
    True picture of the Waste land is here.
    Love to read next.

  • Lost Poet (2/2/2010 4:42:00 AM)

    lot of hidden meanings......good write.......deep thinking.....i like it.....

  • Derek Dowie (4/27/2009 2:05:00 PM)

    I like your poems. Keep on writing

  • L R (12/23/2008 7:51:00 AM)

    Great Writing - Thank you for sharing!

  • Brandon Edwards (12/3/2008 12:06:00 PM)

    that was cool i like how you use that song say good bye

Best Poem of tanvi damle

I Am

I sit in the terrace, gazing at the starry sky,
and think about the answer to the question, 'Who am I? '
I am a girl who wants to be young forever,
but I'm a girl who also wants to grow up and be someone that everyone will remember.
I'm a girl who wants to stay in the protected world my parents have built for me,
but I'm also a girl who wants to touch the sky and break free.
I want to be happy and dance in the rain,
but I also wanna cry for the unfortunate and feel their pain.
I want to be wise and go towards the sun ray,
but i also want to be a fool, trust my ...

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Sorry

Gonna stay in bed for sure today,
cuz of the fight we had yesterday.
I know I'm the one who started this rift,
Which made your spirits away drift.
But i didn't mean to do it,
I'm sorry for every bit.
I swear i won't those things again mention,
& i promise never to your abilities again question.
I know your feeling disgusted,

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